Saturday, June 11, 2011
Life In General
Life is looking up, for the most part. First off, I want to say that YES, I am still working on Boy Meets Girl, but I would like to talk to the boy in the StoryPoem before I post any more off it. Secondly, I am completely and totally in love with this amazing guy, but we have to keep it secret. :'( We can talk as friends, but facebook has this handy dandy little thing called chat, and you can delete those conversations! I keep them always in my heart though. I can't stop smiling! Mainly because I just looked at his FictionPress profile (he's Saxparrot on there, I'm bloodandroses16) and he mentioned me! Here, I'll copy and paste it for those of you too lazy to go look it up.
Good morning, readers and authors! Welcome to my page, the wonderful fictitious page of David "Palm Tree" "Saxparrot".
Just like many others, I write because I find joy in harboring and influencing opinions and emotions. Apparently, I can be quite good at influencing emotion, and God knows i have plenty to reference. I hope to one day travel the world, preferably in a sailing ship or zeppelin, common themes in my stories. I'm more into sci-fi than fantasy for writing, but I love to read both. Anything that isn't real, really. Lately, though, I've been on a big romance spree. And that is real. Of course, we aren't sailing the world or running away just yet, but she is the best inspiration for writing romance that any author could ever hope for.
If you think you like Red Colony. I encourage you to stick in there. Taking some helpful reviews, I've began a massive rewrite, and those wonderful ideas i used to brag about may soon find themselves in a manuscript. I would like to put the first few chapters up here when they're done, though. And who knows; when it's published, i may mail a few autographed copies out to my loyal reviewers, free of charge.
Anyway, I think I'm going to be hanging out here a lot more, so stay tuned and keep an eye out. I appreciate all constructive criticism, even if I don't think I do, so if I'm wrong, by all means, correct me. I love to hear from people, so private message me! Happy reading!
Illinois boy, David
PS- I love shout outs. So this one is yours, ThatLonelyOne and JellicleJuggalo. I hear you're great guys.
PSS- AishaAlex, I'll always care. Love, MarcoJames
I know, right! I can't stop smiling! My stepsister thinks I've gone insane! He's so amazing, and he's NOT that guy that you have to question, because he's actually open with his feelings! Actually, he's usually the one that says I love you first, and anybody who does that is automatically amazing! Okay, I'll stop now and just daydream!
~Zoe
Just like many others, I write because I find joy in harboring and influencing opinions and emotions. Apparently, I can be quite good at influencing emotion, and God knows i have plenty to reference. I hope to one day travel the world, preferably in a sailing ship or zeppelin, common themes in my stories. I'm more into sci-fi than fantasy for writing, but I love to read both. Anything that isn't real, really. Lately, though, I've been on a big romance spree. And that is real. Of course, we aren't sailing the world or running away just yet, but she is the best inspiration for writing romance that any author could ever hope for.
If you think you like Red Colony. I encourage you to stick in there. Taking some helpful reviews, I've began a massive rewrite, and those wonderful ideas i used to brag about may soon find themselves in a manuscript. I would like to put the first few chapters up here when they're done, though. And who knows; when it's published, i may mail a few autographed copies out to my loyal reviewers, free of charge.
Anyway, I think I'm going to be hanging out here a lot more, so stay tuned and keep an eye out. I appreciate all constructive criticism, even if I don't think I do, so if I'm wrong, by all means, correct me. I love to hear from people, so private message me! Happy reading!
Illinois boy, David
PS- I love shout outs. So this one is yours, ThatLonelyOne and JellicleJuggalo. I hear you're great guys.
PSS- AishaAlex, I'll always care. Love, MarcoJames
I know, right! I can't stop smiling! My stepsister thinks I've gone insane! He's so amazing, and he's NOT that guy that you have to question, because he's actually open with his feelings! Actually, he's usually the one that says I love you first, and anybody who does that is automatically amazing! Okay, I'll stop now and just daydream!
~Zoe
Sunday, June 5, 2011
Boy Meets Girl
A/N IT'S NOT DONE YET, BUT I WANTED TO PUT SOME OF IT UP
Boy meets girl. Girl meets boy.
Boy likes girl. Girl likes boy.
Boy can talk for hours an end with girl. Girl can talk for hours on end with boy.
Girl’s parents hate both boy AND girl.
Girl’s parents forbid boy and girl from seeing each other.
Boy listens, to be safe. Girl listens, to be safe.
Boy can’t take it anymore. Girl can’t take it anymore.
Boy sneaks to talk to girl. Girl sneaks to talk to boy.
Girl’s parents find out.
Girl’s parents get really mad.
Boy talks to girl’s parents. Girl talks to girl’s parents.
Boy convinces girl’s parents. Girl convinces girl’s parents.
Boy tries to hold back on talking to girl. Girl tries to hold back on talking to boy.
Boy does, for a little. Girl does, for a little.
Girl’s parents are pleased.
Girl’s parents stop being so suspicious.
Boy is happy when he’s talking to girl. Girl is happy when she’s talking to boy.
Boy wants to talk to girl more. Girl wants to talk to boy more.
Boy does, and loves it. Girl does, and loves it.
Girl’s parents, not so much.
Girl’s parents stay quiet, waiting to see what will happen.
Boy wants to run away with girl. Girl wants to run away with boy.
Boy plots for the future. Girl plots for the future.
Boy formulates a plan. Girl formulates a plan.
Girl’s parents begin to suspect.
Girl’s parents ask why they would do so much for the other.
Boy says it’s because he loves girl. Girl says it’s because she loves boy.
Boy does love girl. Girl does love boy.
Boy would throw away his life for girl. Girl would throw away her life for boy.
Girl’s parents don’t understand.
Girl’s parents don’t know what love is, so why should girl and boy?
Boy confirms where with girl. Girl confirms where with boy.
Boy confirms when with girl. Girl confirms when with boy.
Boy asks girl if she’s ready. Girl asks boy if he’s ready.
Boy is ready. Girl is ready.
Girl’s parents are oblivious.
Boy makes an excuse to get out of the house. Girl makes an excuse to get out of the house.
Boy goes there, and looks for girl. Girl goes there, and looks for boy.
Boy meets up with girl. Girl meets up with boy.
Boy is in heaven. Girl is in heaven.
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